Cutting Eyes
post-ripple small talk~
reconnecting after a
hard conversation
but eyes tell the truth
might as well pass out peanuts
feed the elephant
which just grows bigger
eyes that will no longer meet
resentment sets in
Today our host for #VerseLove is Chea of Texas, who inspires us to write poetry with regional dialect ~ to tell something as it really happened, in our home language. You can read her prompt and the poetry of others here. I’m sharing a phone conversation with my dad one early morning not too long ago and wrote it in prose during the Slice of Life Story Challenge.
Hopin' Folks Out
my phone rings early
Dad
I have a story I need to tell
while it’s fresh on my mind
before I forget
I grab my pen
It was back in the old days in rural Georgia
when I was preaching at Ohoopee
This was down around Highway 19
where you’d go through Wrightsville
meander over to Tennille
and then head on out to Sandersville
a sea of cotton fields
roads all red clay
Ohoopee was a church of miracles
a cured drunk who loved the Lord led the singin'
“On Jordan’s Stormy Banks,”
only he pronounced it Jurdan’s.
and he weren’t wrong.
a fellow named Noah in the church needed help finding where to dig his well
even with a name like Noah
back in those days
people were people
folks’ existence was all about
helpin' their neighbors out
now old Elvis heard about it“I’m coming over to hope you out”
I went over there too
to see Elvis hope his neighbor out
Elvis said he had a divinin' rod –
a hickory branch – to find water
Elvis walked
it tremored
I saw it with my own eyesthey dug that well right there
they called this place Possum Scuffle
back over in Harrison by Raines Store
over yonder by Deep Step and Goat Town
by Margaret Holmes's cannery ~
black eyed peas and collards.
in Acts 27
Luke is in a ship in a storm
using stabilizing ropes
~ also hawsers or helps
a help is a hope rope
on land or at seait's Biblical, Kimnow
youremember thatwrite it down
Our host today for Day 26 of #VerseLove is Donnetta Norris of Arlington, Texas, who inspires us to write borrowed line poems. You can read her full prompt and the poetry of others here. Today, I’m choosing a line from Mary Oliver’s The Gift: that held only the eventual, inevitable and dropping the word eventual.
Family Bible from Photostock
Family Bible
I close the worn book
haunting family secrets
manifesting truths
that hold only the
inevitable shocking
revelations: pasts
Jessica of Arkansas is our host today for Day 25 of #VerseLove, challenging us to write genetic cinquains of either American or Didactic structure. You can read her full prompt and the poems of others here.
Today is Day 24 of #VerseLove at http://www.ethicalela.com, and Susie Morice is our host. She inspires us to write poems using a junk drawer to determine things about who we are. You can read her full prompt and the poems of others here. I chose to write about the treasure I found in someone else’s junk dogs.
Fitz
These Three Kings
I found three castoffs
betrayed, neglected, abused
I crowned these three kings
Boo RadleyOllie, “the baby” who is always ready to play
Alexis Ennis is our host today for #VerseLove, inspring us to write poems about historical figures. You can read her full prompt here. I chose Teddy Roosevelt’s firstborn child as my figure.
TR’s diary entry Valentine’s Day when both his mother and wife died, one upstairs, one downstairs.
As a preacher's kid (we seem to have a reputation to live down to, and I've always done my best to keep the trouble going), I was a reader drawn to the troublemakers like Queenie Peavy by Robert Burch in children's literature and Alice Roosevelt in biographies. So that favorite interview question about whom I'd bring back if I could go to lunch with anyone? Yeah, mine was always Alice Roosevelt, with footnotes about how she and I would have surely landed in jail together, cellmates somewhere for some crazy idea we hatched. She had her own eye color named for her (and the US Navy uses this color named for her on its insignia). So much more to tell about her, but here's the seed-starter packet:
Eyes of Alice Bluenot under MY roof
her father TR told her
of smoking her cigs
she puffed on the roof
her snake Emily Spinach
there too, in her purse
no Taft supporter~
a murrain on him! she raged
blue eyes her namesake
what a character!
completely out of control
she fascinates me!
come sit by me if
you don’t have something nice to
say about someone!
born two days before
mom died upstairs, grandma down
under the same roof
death clouded her birth,
Alice Roosevelt Longworth
lived in those shadows
For Alice Roosevelt Longworth
https://www.smithsonianmag.com/history/from-a-white-house-wedding-to-a-pet-snake-alice-roosevelts-escapades-captivated-america-180981139/
Today is Earth Day, and Emily encourages us to write about an island of our choice. I grew up on two islands – one in Georgia, one in South Carolina. I love today’s topic, because I’m back on St. Simons today spiffing up our rental unit here, remembering my youth softball league playing in the ballpark across the street, walking the village where I crabbed on the pier with my mother. It’s a perfect day to enjoy the island vibe with three out of control schnoodles who can’t get enough of all the salty sea smells.
St. Simons Island, Georgia
Childhood
Memories splash
Time-faded photographs
Redigitized to present-day
Beach walks
sea smells
salty schnoodles
savoring Saturday
still snoozing, sunrise sand dune soon
spoiled sons
Darius Phelps of New York is our host today for Day 21 of #VerseLove at http://www.ethicalela.com, inspiring us to write poems of grief or disillusionment. You can read more about Darius and read his full prompt here. He mentions that the ancient Chinese believed that by burning the house down when relatives died, it would send the house to the place where they were so they could have their homes beyond this life. I reflected for a while on that idea this morning, even chuckling about the Calgon laundry whitener that I remember commercials for as a child – – an Asian actor would come into the frame holding a box, saying, “Ancient Chinese Secret” when someone wondered about how the clothes got so clean. I think the ancient Chinese had a lot of things right. Come join us and read today’s poems.
Up in Flames ^ Choose One: House or Legacy? ^
those ancient Chinese
had it right: burn the house down!
strike up the torch flame!
better the house go
up in smoke than the siblings
killing each other
who gets the dwelling?
who gets the crystal timepiece?
who "gets" anything?
executor’s call:
who gets to make decisions?
who denies morphine?
which one plans all meals?
oh, but NO SUGAR, stage 4
cancer patient fat?!?
what is this fresh hell??
give Mom a damn M&M!
stop controlling LIFE!
inheritance sucks
some get fortunes, some get F(ORK$#)
who "gets" anything??!
those ancient Chinese
had it right: strike the match and
walk in peace from fire
Katrina Morrison of Tulsa, Oklahoma is our host today for Day 20 of #VerseLove at http://www.ethicalela.com. She invites us to write poems about our favorite places to look and think as we write. You can read her full prompt here, along with the poems of others. I write in the early mornings in my comfy chair in the living room, but it’s not my favorite place to write – – my favorite place is in my camper in the wee hours of the morning, long before the sun rises, with dogs piled on both sides of me and in my lap (we call them our “dog chocks” because they lock us in just like tire chocks keep the camper from rolling away). Without the deadlines and chores of being at home, time to write is savored at a campsite.
The Max: Minimalistic Writing
a Lagun table
swings sideways, allowing me
access to my seat
in the Little Guy
Max camper, my favorite
space to look and think
my back to the door
windows cracked just a smidgen
ushering fresh air
hot coffee gurgling
welcoming familiar words
I had forgotten
perspective sharpens
moments come into focus
small spaces do that
a simple teardrop
uncluttered necessities
essentials only
less is truly more
dogs, Chromebook, gray throw blanket
wrapping “4” writers
strumming my fingers
on the ridges of my cup
words percolating
ideas swirl like steam
materializing just
above the cup rim
playing hide and seek
Marco Polo swimming words
….slippery words, caught!
2 of our 3 boys (on our throw blanket) who like to help me write
Today, I've written a riddle-type poem (Haiku two lines short of a Haiku sonnet), open-ended, to invite readers to title this poem AND to add two seven-syllable lines to the end to make it a true Haiku sonnet if you wish. I'll add my title after the photo at the bottom so you can see what my initial title was. It's subject to change :).
never have I met
anyone who on first taste
liked its bitterness
sipping piping hot
aromatic wakefulness
swallowing its truth
ah, but sip by sip
its addiction is for real~
can’t live without it!
A lavender latte from my local coffee shop, where I’ll be reading poetry tonight – YAAAY!A book of poetry
The title I initially landed on was Coffee and Poetry – original, I know! Perhaps you can figure out a better title for this poem! Leave ideas in the comments, please.