Countryside Charms – Slice of Life Challenge Day 14, The Stafford Challenge Day 58

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Countryside Charms

daffodil daybreaks rouse meadow-mist eyes
bluebird sings blessings with praise-reverent cries

daylily sunbursts coax seedlings to rise
paint carpets of clover in emerald surprise

marigold sunsets kiss rolling hill skies
lift sweet bedtime prayers on wings of fireflies

12 Replies to “Countryside Charms – Slice of Life Challenge Day 14, The Stafford Challenge Day 58”

  1. Utterly beautiful, Kim, every single set of lines. How I love rhyme! And – as you know – how I love pastoral scenes. Bluebirds, symbolizing the inherent reverence… emerald green, a new favorite color for me…and here are your trademark fireflies. I am right in the midst, absorbing the peace and wonder, for you have painted the scene to life and brought me in.

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    1. Thank you so much, Fran. I see in both of our poems today a lot of need for peace and stopping to take breaths and bask in the moments. I thought of you instantly when I saw the heron yesterday. And the hymn I will sing in my head, it is one of my favorites. I’m so glad to know you are a fellow hymn lover. With all the world around us moving in the direction of praise music – some of which I also enjoy on occasion – I find the poetry and reverence of hymn lyrics and music to be medicinal and healing.

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  2. Kim, you have captured a peaceful rhyme and rhythm in your poem, making this springtime beauty accessible to all of us too. You have managed to get in several flora and fauna examples, showing the teeming life of springtime.

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  3. Kim, your poem is beautiful and inspiring. I love your use of rhyme in this one. It is so uplifting! Is this a particular poetry form? Love your final line since fireflies are a perfect bedtime image.

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