Posted on March 20, 2021 by kimhaynesjohnsonA Star Haiku A Star Haiku ⭐️ a twinkling pinhole in the liner between earth and heaven: Mom winks Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading...
I love the ending. It has a certain calm resilience to it. Mom is gone, but not gone. There is comfort in the stars. LikeLike Reply
Your last line yes she does wink and I believe the reminder is to look to the stars for inspiration and hope. LikeLike Reply
Breathtaking, beautiful, stark, profoundly comforting and lighthearted all at once, Kim – how DO you do it, in so few words?? I understand both the far-ness and the nearness. And the love, still shining on. LikeLike Reply
Fran, thank you! The love just keeps on! I get reminders – hawks, pennies, stars, ….she still finds her ways! LikeLike Reply
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I love the ending. It has a certain calm resilience to it. Mom is gone, but not gone. There is comfort in the stars.
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Your last line yes she does wink and I believe the reminder is to look to the stars for inspiration and hope.
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Breathtaking, beautiful, stark, profoundly comforting and lighthearted all at once, Kim – how DO you do it, in so few words?? I understand both the far-ness and the nearness. And the love, still shining on.
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Wow, like Fran said! 🙂 I love the farness of the star and the nearness of Mom's love.
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Thank you, Margaret! Yes, so many reasons to look to the heavens!
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Absolutely! Thank you!
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Fran, thank you! The love just keeps on! I get reminders – hawks, pennies, stars, ….she still finds her ways!
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Thank you, Denise!
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