Open Write September Day 4

Our host today at http://www.ethicalela.com for the September Open Write is Larin of Oklahoma. She inspires us to write “I Thought You Should Know” poems in any form of our choice. You can read her full prompt here, along with the poems of others.

Special thanks to Two Writing Teachers at Slice of Life

To the Craftsman in Kentucky Who Made the Secretariat

I thought you should know

this piece has been in my family

since 1966, and we won’t give it up~

it sits in the dining room by the table

here in the heat of Georgia

with a fake plant on top since I

can’t keep real ones alive

like the matriarchs did

and I only wish I could rewind

time through all its days and

relive some of the simplest

moments next to it

through the years

as hash browns fried,

cinnamon toast browned,

bacon sizzled,

teaspoons swirled in steaming mugs

and family talked

~ really talked ~

in those hours like they’d have forever

only they didn’t

and we don’t

which is why, Craftsman, your

work of art is safe with us

turning back the years

in ghostly oak

memories

7 Replies to “Open Write September Day 4”

  1. What a gorgeous Secretariat, Kim. Your poem captures the essence of family heirlooms and the memories they hold. The Secretariat is like silent witness to generations of family moments, both mundane and precious.

    What a touching tribute to both the artisan and your family’s history!

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  2. I knew I had to come here and read your poem again. I thought there would be a photo! What a beauty this is. I think of a piece of furniture that had been with us since 1966 would look a lot more worn and tired, but that craftsmanship is part of the long-lasting beauty. Gorgeous poem and piece of furniture.

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