Today’s writing host, Susan Ahlbrand, challenged us to write a poem that forces us to look at the world or something in it in a different way. I borrowed my first and last lines from Mary Oliver – the first from “I Looked Up,” and the last from “Wild, Wild.”
Heartwarmed
I looked up and there it was –
left on a re-purposed junk mail envelope on the kitchen counter
by my coffee cup
a love note
scribbled
in his handwriting
with his always-handy
shirt pocket pen
from when he left to go to work
and sitting on top:
a cattywampus-shaped
York Peppermint Pattie
in its silver wrapper
the size of a half-dollar
I could already taste the sensation –
the dark chocolate and mint swirling together
the perfect pair of flavors
his note read:
because I love you
I saved this just for you
much love
hope you have a wonderful Wednesday
(and an exclamation with a heart as the point)
I took a quick snapshot and texted him to say
thanks
that was so sweet of you
I love you too
be safe
but then received a minor confession:
sorry –
I carried it in my shirt pocket and
it melted a little bit
I felt my heart stir
as I gazed
at the imperfect York
seeing it much differently now
than I had before
and after a tearful moment
I replied:
all the better
it’s literally heart warmed
from you to me
he quipped back:
that’s true
better than my back pocket, I guess
this is what love is