December X Marks the Spot

Mo Daley of Illinois introduced the X Marks the Spot poem in one of our monthly Open Writes through Ethicalela.com. To write one, find any page of print and make an X from corner to corner or across any part, then list the words the X touches. Using one, a couple, a few, some, most, or all of those words, write a poem. I chose a recent essay by humorist David Sedaris, “And Your Little Dog, Too,” for my X and used chained haiku for the form.

Here are the words I listed:

unconscious hole bent sells past shout seemingly walking foot mountain addicted leg snarling registered recreational pushed realized obnoxiously illicit downtown

Aha Moment

walking downtown past

addicted Christmas shoppers

who obnoxiously

pushed through seemingly

illicit mountains of junk

I realized it ~

we’re too hell-bent on

recreational spending

to give homespun gifts

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