Bryan Ripley Crandall, our host for Day 5 of VerseLove 2025 at http://www.ethicalela.com, lives in Stratford, Connecticut, where he directs the Connecticut Writing Project and is Professor of English Education at Fairfield University.
Bryan offers these directions: “Write about a scar, one that may be physical in nature or one that might be more emotional.” You can read his full prompt here.
I chose a Pantoum form for this poem and made the decision to keep a staccato rhythm, as if touching a hot stove and getting burned.
Heart Scar Pantoum
my heart is scarred
it opened
it believed
it got stomped
it opened
it trusted
it got stomped
it realized
it trusted
it committed
it realized
it learned
it committed
it believed
it learned
my heart is scarred

