August Open Write Day 2

Today at http://www.ethicalela.com, Linda is our host for The Open Write. She inspires us to write Clunker Exchange Poems, intentionally exchanging a line (I chose into another world to use in my poem and offer all of my lines as clunkers today). You can read her full prompt here.

Sunday Morning Scrambled

all hell breaks loose

here on this peaceful

Sunday morning as I

sip coffee, write

a clunker exchange ~

sudden frantic barking

of my three vicious

Schnoodles bounces

and echoes through

the house as they

slo-mo scramble

from window to window

no-traction toenails

on the rugless wood

floors, looking like

Saturday morning

Flintstone cartoon

pets running for all

they’re worth but

going nowhere fast

when I look out and see

mama D-E-E-R

(no need to spell it

now – besides, our one

speller alerts the

other two anyway)

streaking into the woods

her two spotteds

stumbling along behind

her, pausing at the edge

to look back at this

house of horrors

where hell hath unleashed

its fury on this holy morning

then disappear

into another world

with dangers all its own

far from here (here~

where I want to exchange

all the clunked-up lines

for world peace

on the Funny Farm)

Fitz, the dog who knows D-E-E-R spells deer, leads the charge on scaring the deer away. Even the babies. Especially the babies.

2 Replies to “August Open Write Day 2”

  1. Kim – I love this whole poem and the whole vicious schnoodle chase. I can hear them – especially the “no-traction toenails.” Yep, that bring me back to my Fox Terrier days when my Sniffy would leap from window to window in frantic chase to check out a wayward squirrel. I think Sniffy was jealous of the squirrel’s audacious freedom!

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