Clifton’s Cliffhanger – The Stafford Challenge Day 50, SOLC Day 6

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I’m borrowing a line or two from Lucille Clifton today, from her book Quilting: Poems 1987-1990, to write a borrowed line poem. This line in italics is from her poem “eyes”:
I could say so much to you
if you could understand me

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Resyntaxed Semantics

I could say so much to you
if you could understand me


but the mixmaster
spun the vinyl
resyntaxed
semantics

now
I'm the one
who doesn't
recognize
the tune

I once knew
the original
lyrics
of
y
o
u