Trembling Tricube

Today’s poem is a tricube – a poem of three stanzas, each having three lines composed of three syllables. This one has a rhyme scheme of aaabbbccc. This one is inspired by an argument I witnessed, right when it hit the fan. The whole thing reminded me of a Jenga game where you watch quietly, knowing the pieces are going to fall and the whole thing will tip a little and crash…..

Tip of the Iceberg

what to do

they fooled you

such words flew

saw the lies

sheep disguise

passion dies

two will go

they both know

all-time low

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  1. I saw a similar interaction between a teen and a parent in my local grocery yesterday where the words were tossed slowly but with clear damage to the relationship and peace of their world. Your comparison to the Jenga game is perfect because both sides know how it will end!!!!! I’ve been there – many times with family members.

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