#VerseLove Day 20 with Susan Ahlbrand of Indiana – Lingering Lines

Susan Ahlbrand of Indiana is our host today for the 20th day of VerseLove 2025. She inspires us to write poems using Broadway lines that stick. Since it’s Easter and I’m heading to Callaway Gardens on Pine Mountain, Georgia for the Sunrise Service this morning, I’m going to wait and choose a line from a Sunrise Service song and change things up a bit.

Check back later for a poem and for pictures of the sunrise on this Easter morning.


Honk! Honk! Honk!

we watched the Cliff Swallows

coming and going from their

mud nests under the eave

of the dock as we waited

for the service to begin

off they went, and back again

as we sang

out of the silence

the roaring lion

declared the grave has no

claim on me

and then we heard them

overhead, coming our way

Honk! Honk! Honk!

right smack dab in the middle

of the Callaway Gardens

Easter Sunrise Service

here they came, flying around

the people

commanding our attention

I counted twelve

and the loudest

Canadian Goose was

the one in the back

Immediately my mind

went to the twelfth disciple

Judas Iscariot

who betrayed Jesus

for thirty pieces of silver

leading to His crucifixion

this cup Jesus asked to be

taken from Him in the

Garden of Gethsemane

and my mind went into

wondering mode

as I sat in Callaway Gardens

hearing the twelfth goose

honk, spurring the pastor

to remark

isn’t that a beautiful sound?

(laughter from the crowd)

that’s how the goose gives praise!

another hymn sung

but drops of grief can ne’er repay

the debt of love I owe

here, Lord I give my self away

’tis all that I can do

Judas, the Greek version of

the Hebrew name Judah,

means Let God be Praised!

the one disciple not from Galilee

the one who betrayed his friend

the one whose evil actions God used for His purpose

the chain of events starter leading to our salvation

the twelfth one by whom God was not blindsided

the one who hanged himself with regret in the aftermath

holds a message for us

that there is hope for all of us yet

that God uses evil for good

here was the twelfth goose

circling us overhead

honking the loudest

on Easter Sunday morning

to the masses below

Honk! Honk! Honk!

Let God be Praised!

Let God be Praised!

Let God be Praised!

as we closed in song

Because he lives

I can face tomorrow

Because He lives

all fear is gone

Because I know

He holds the future

And life is worth the living

Just because He lives!

I disagree with predominant

Christian belief that Judas is in hell.

I believe he had a change of heart at

the eleventh hour, fifty-ninth second

(he was twelfth for a reason)

and that he was the loudest

God-praising goose

this morning.

Hallelujah!

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