VerseLove Day 11: I Remember

I’m hosting Day 11 of VerseLove 2025, and I’m excited to share my prompt with you today. You can read it below, or you can see it on the ethicalela.com website here.

Inspiration

I’m using a prompt from 90 Ways of Community (p. 140) for today’s inspiration.  You can download a free copy here. In the book, I describe Joe Brainard’s  I Remember strategy. When members of EthicalELA attended the National Council of Teachers of English conference in Boston, Massachusetts, I combined the I Remember approach with Linda Reif’s Quick Write model to inspire attendees to create random poems in a short time frame.  The most heartfelt poems came out of that session.  Imagine my surprise when I realized that Linda Reif herself was in that session as we shared her Quick Write model!  

Process

Reminisce on a time and place in your life that you want to revisit, or

Ruminate on a time and place in your life that you want to re-imagine

with new eyes and perspective, or

Imagine the future and predict what you will remember.

Give yourself two minutes to list whatever comes to mind, keeping your pen moving the entire time.  Circle one idea, then write for two more minutes on your chosen idea.  Repeat the process as many times as you like to unearth the specifics.  Your poem can be as short or as long as you’d like, and take any form your prefer (see here for a list of form suggestions).  Accept that whatever you write is good enough. Give yourself permission to reject this idea and instead write whatever the universe calls you to write today.  I’m sharing a previously written poem as my sample poem.

I Remember

I remember clutching 

her warm hand 

as the death rattle beat the drum 

of her final march 

deferring to my brother, 

“I picked the spot. 

You pick the plot” 

I remember pleading, 

“Lord, I need a sign 

she can rest in peace” 

confessing I’d prayed for a sign: 

a majestic bird in flight, wings outstretched, 

assuring peace 

I remember fighting tears, 

wanting to shoot three birds circling overhead 

resisting the urge to punch my brother, 

who was fighting his own tears

wait……of laughter? 

I remember eyeing him, 

raising one questioning brow, 

tightening my lips, 

muttering obscenities 

wondering if he was drunk 

as he whispered sideways, 

“She showed up! With her parents!” 

I remember feeling the full force of her humor, 

her sign: sending buzzards in place of an eagle 

I remember my animal-loving mother – 

prankish and ever-present. 

Even now.

Since my poem was previously written, I’ve added a borrowed line poem to today’s blog, since I pledged to write a new poem each day for The Stafford Challenge. I used lines from yesterday’s poems on http://www.ethicalela.com to compose this Cento poem:

I Step Outside

to tend to the present

cradled crescents

the softening sounds of spring

curled against

that dark corner

the return of yellow

watch a swallowtail circle

fuschia petals

the sitting still

but don’t we all?

what I needed that day

comforting

peace

welcome to my front porch

no longer held in expectation’s thrall

the black, brown, gray, sometimes mossy green

most of the morning, watching birds

shouldn’t we give shelter when we can?

I lift the binoculars

I chat with them

which I am grateful and so at home

this present iteration

and all that it holds within

bringing hope for spring

a messenger of change

wait for it….

like a breath not yet let go

outside my window now

a drifting hush like a silent call

smiles ruefully

forever-alive bright

so direct, clear, certain

the fields of flowers and

swirling colors and rainbow creation

steady the tensions

there’s lots of good stuff to smell here

so far, so good……

now I scarcely remember

yesterday

I look around for birds

that are calling to become

will become a constellation of stars and I realize

His treasure.

Leave a comment